Below are poems you wrote today, read each other's work and give positive feedback in the comments section
Poem 1
Sammy Keyes is a detective,
She works all day and night trying to solve this
crazy mystery,
She is one big troublemaker prepared to fight,
But they face many problems on the way to find the solution,
Sammy keyes is as powerful as a lion.
Diya
Sammy’s personality
Sammy is a brave and trouble making girl,she is as sneaky as a raccoon,
Sammy is also a detective trying to solve a
mystery, but she has trouble on the way,
She is willing to do anything to solve
this crazy mystery,With her friend Marrisa they are both ready to fight to do what is right.
Laiyalee
Poem 3
Faster and faster the fist comes closer
Heather is scared but does not defend
but that is not the end
The war has just begun and it was not fun
Heather made life horrible for sammy
and who was was informed grammy
who was suspended sammy
but life was not ended
LAter later at school
Heather had lied and tied a big thing to her nose
and the principle choose to suspend
Heater sadly not forever
Bored Bored as she is
out the window there he is
a man through the window at the heavenly Hotel
kneeling down stealing
through a purse that is bought down from town
What does sammy do
you do not want to know
What she does is smile and wave like he is is a cave
Eating meat on his feet
and so the mystery began
Ida
Sammy and Heather Acosta
It all began that morning when the pin went up up and in the butt
it all started when Heather and Sammy got into a clammy
and they went bam bam and wham out she goes lying on the floor with an enormous nose with a huge pore
sammy's goes home when heather goes to the doc with an ox.
Mimi
Poem 1
Sammy Keyes is a detective,
She works all day and night trying to solve this
crazy mystery,
She is one big troublemaker prepared to fight,
But they face many problems on the way to find the solution,
Sammy keyes is as powerful as a lion.
Diya
Sammy’s personality
Sammy is a brave and trouble making girl,she is as sneaky as a raccoon,
Sammy is also a detective trying to solve a
mystery, but she has trouble on the way,
She is willing to do anything to solve
this crazy mystery,With her friend Marrisa they are both ready to fight to do what is right.
Laiyalee
Poem 3
Faster and faster the fist comes closer
Heather is scared but does not defend
but that is not the end
The war has just begun and it was not fun
Heather made life horrible for sammy
and who was was informed grammy
who was suspended sammy
but life was not ended
LAter later at school
Heather had lied and tied a big thing to her nose
and the principle choose to suspend
Heater sadly not forever
Bored Bored as she is
out the window there he is
a man through the window at the heavenly Hotel
kneeling down stealing
through a purse that is bought down from town
What does sammy do
you do not want to know
What she does is smile and wave like he is is a cave
Eating meat on his feet
and so the mystery began
Ida
Sammy and Heather Acosta
It all began that morning when the pin went up up and in the butt
it all started when Heather and Sammy got into a clammy
and they went bam bam and wham out she goes lying on the floor with an enormous nose with a huge pore
sammy's goes home when heather goes to the doc with an ox.
Mimi